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What Was He Thinking? by ~DrawingInTheSky:iconDrawingInTheSky:



what did jesus think when he looked upon the faces before him,
nailed to the cross they proffered him on,
did he believe they would renounce their ways,
and take him down and let him live the rest of his days,
in the honesty and charity he proclaimed,
for the God that they did not believe in?
©2009-2010 ~DrawingInTheSky
:icondrawinginthesky:

Author's Comments

Me and Jesus have a quiet understanding, as long as I believe in him to some fraction; 'God' doesn't fuck me over to bad ;P

better as a small slam poem.

~Dits


will be in Literature Club's Book of 2009

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:iconaimzhigh:
That is really good.

--
But soft! What light through yonder window breaks?
It is the East, and Juliet the sun!
Arise fair sun and kill the envious moon,
Who is already pale and sick with grief
That thou her maid art far more fair then she.
:icondrawinginthesky:
thank you very much.

thanks for the :+fav: also : ))

~Dits

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*WritingInTheSky - I Draw

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